As tension hangs heavy words jump from lips to ears from ears to lips, a hum storming through the darkness of a magic forest where a creature can thrive while passions swarm without
Brief but intense. Love the movement of words from lips to ears and back again. In a world where it is becoming increasingly difficult to tell the good guys from the bad, you offer sage advice with your conclusion.
HEARSAY
Passions swarm within too, these are the saddest ones.
ReplyDeleteLove the tightness of this - the danger of the jumping words - good one :)
ReplyDeleteThey do that.
ReplyDeleteThe power of words and stories keeps good and bad creatures alive..thankfully!
ReplyDeleteNice 'little' piece! Well done!
ReplyDeleteStrength in brevity... you got it in spades, Stan!
ReplyDeleteThere are for sure some mystery....pst! ~ fun!
ReplyDeleteLove this, its brevity and wit. Can almost hear the old wives leaning in for the gossip. Excellent.
ReplyDeleteSo very intense... and the passions really storm around it.
ReplyDeleteBrief but intense. Love the movement of words from lips to ears and back again. In a world where it is becoming increasingly difficult to tell the good guys from the bad, you offer sage advice with your conclusion.
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
Hearsay? Thought provoking I say - and in so few words.
ReplyDelete